Disaster keeps coming

Lady Esabelle has a break down

Ginessa stood there for a moment before she turned back to the house. She was just outside the door when she heard a loud noise come from inside.
. Mom no she thought as she pulled open the door. To see her mom there on the door broken glass all around and her hand was bleeding very good.
. "Mom hold on don't move."
"It doesn't matter now. Aedan is gone never to return. I want to be him. I don't want to be alone here."
. "Mom what are you talking about? You are not alone. I am here. Let me clean that up for you."
. Ginessa sat down next to her with a wet cloth and dapped the blood up from around the cut. It was deep with some glass in it.
. "Mom talk to me. Why did you do this?"
. "He lied Aedan lied to me. He has never done that before. He told me in two days he would be back....ouch." Esabelle pulled her hand back.
. "Mom please it will infected if I don't clean it out."
. "Did you ever ask yourself what I may want. You don't have all the answers Ginessa."
"I am sorry mom. I never claimed to have answers. But this cut is serious. Set right there while I call the doctor."

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How is the plot and story? This is my first draft.