Kaleidoscope

Like A Kaleidoscope With All It's Pretty Colors
Mezmorized By You And I Enter In
Stuck In A Moment I Can't Change Or Forget
Drowning In Our Sea Of Immaculate Sin.

Reviews

[annalysiar]

Short. Yet the message come through beautifully.
Great write

[Joshua Knight]

I like the phrase 'immaculate sin.' This poem is quite punchy too.

[Chris]

This one attracts! I can soooo appreciate "a mid-step pause".

[CMC]

Quick question. Is the capitalization stylistic? If it is, that puts a neat spin on the emotion of the poem. I like the brevity of the poem, and it conveys such tremulous joy.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my...dynamic tension at its best Stacy .. in so few words for me you create the potential for great tragedy or great love ... closing line is so well done says i!
E.

[mournful bear]

Another Beautiful Write Keep'em coming .Thank You!!!

[Michael G. Smith]

I love the analogy. The sin I can do without, lol.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words. I liked how you twisted the words to a meaningful poem. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Creatively and wonderfully written.

[andrew mitchell]

Isnt love a kaleidescope of colours. Well done!