Collide

Sleep, Dreams, Fantasy
Somewhere Among Them, We Meet
Where The Worlds Collide

Reviews

[Rhayne]

ahhh, I know this one! That place where I found my Prince of Warriors, Dhaval.

[annalysiar]

I love these
I hope you keep writing them

[MarkAndTheOcean]

I always loved the romance of dreams, a wonderland where anything can happen and where you can fall in love with a person you never met and probably will never know.

[Michael G. Smith]

I just love when those worlds collide. They create a brilliancy of ectasy.

[IWAZHERE]

Something about each word being capitalized gives it a cool aesthetic. It makes me want to focus on each word more. I like the connection between the three elements of the first line and I like the sound repeated in "sleep" "dream" and "meet". It makes the poem feel more intertwined.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

sounds logical,we meet somewhere in the middle,then the poetry takes over

[Najam Us Saher]

Dreamy and raw. I really loved the way you have expressed so much in just three lines. Well done.

[Einstein Noodle]

nice! lots of image making as the first line bursts open my own sleep and dreams ... love the action in L3 ... i see fireworks and star bursts exploding ... all from such simple, straightforward language and form .. i am just sitting here enjoying the afterglow ;)
E.