Shelter
A Poem by
Stacy Purvis
Shelter From The Storm
Awareness Bringing Us Warmth
Umbrella For Two 🌂
© 2018 Stacy Purvis
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awwwwwwwww very romantic says i ... one of my all time songs from Neil Sedaka ...i was at a concert of his about 4 yrs ago ... he was in his 70s and if he lost any .. it would be maybe 3 % of his voice .. and he sang for almost 2 hrs. with one interlude of about 20 minutes while a protege' took the stage ..it was such a good concert! ... needless to say i sure enjoyed reading your poem .. so many good feelings and memories attached to the rain in my life! thanks Stacy!
E.
https://youtu.be/SsYIiY2wnyU
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Lovely haiku
Keep writing
Posted 5 Years Ago
Lovely haiku
Keep writing
Proved it! You can compress anything in 3 lines!!! Nice one!
Posted 6 Years Ago
Proved it! You can compress anything in 3 lines!!! Nice one!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
a nice haiku how the umbrella becomes the bond to unite two.
Posted 6 Years Ago
a nice haiku how the umbrella becomes the bond to unite two.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Stacy,
Being in love, caught in a rainstorm, feeling that sensual closeness, your words captured all of these moments. Well done.
Peace,
Richie b.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Stacy,
Being in love, caught in a rainstorm, feeling that sensual closeness, your words captured all of these moments. Well done.
Peace,
Richie b.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Everybody needs one of those! :)
Posted 6 Years Ago
Everybody needs one of those! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Short and very sweet dear Anastasia. A umbrella for two. Always nice. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
Short and very sweet dear Anastasia. A umbrella for two. Always nice. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
awwwwwwwww very romantic says i ... one of my all time songs from Neil Sedaka ...i was at a concert of his about 4 yrs ago ... he was in his 70s and if he lost any .. it would be maybe 3 % of his voice .. and he sang for almost 2 hrs. with one interlude of about 20 minutes while a protege' took the stage ..it was such a good concert! ... needless to say i sure enjoyed reading your poem .. so many good feelings and memories attached to the rain in my life! thanks Stacy!
E.
https://youtu.be/SsYIiY2wnyU
Posted 6 Years Ago
awwwwwwwww very romantic says i ... one of my all time songs from Neil Sedaka ...i was at a concert of his about 4 yrs ago ... he was in his 70s and if he lost any .. it would be maybe 3 % of his voice .. and he sang for almost 2 hrs. with one interlude of about 20 minutes while a protege' took the stage ..it was such a good concert! ... needless to say i sure enjoyed reading your poem .. so many good feelings and memories attached to the rain in my life! thanks Stacy!
E.
https://youtu.be/SsYIiY2wnyU
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A lovely haiku, Stacy. A storm, an umbrella and two people cuddled together underneath. It doesn't get much better than that.
Posted 6 Years Ago
A lovely haiku, Stacy. A storm, an umbrella and two people cuddled together underneath. It doesn't get much better than that.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
lol,i will need that tonight,severe thunder storms tornadoes and 70 mph winds without the tornado
loved the write
Posted 6 Years Ago
lol,i will need that tonight,severe thunder storms tornadoes and 70 mph winds without the tornado
loved the write
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Stacy Purvis Columbus, OH
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Altruistic Enigmatic Polymath | Writer, Poet, Actress, Musician, EMT, CNA, Phlebotomist. I'm an Artist. I paint pictures of the verbal kind.☕️❤️ 333
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