Umbrella For Two
A Poem by
Stacy Purvis
Umbrella For Two Affection And Protection Love, Always With You
© 2017 Stacy Purvis
Reviews
dear Anastasia .. I suppose the Rain would make your poem a Haiku.. instead of a Senryu ... my error on first review.... Truly, Pat
Posted 7 Years Ago
A beautiful Senyru ... an umbrella made for two...
Never blue ...
Rainbows are coming and bluebirds will
sing, Forever with you.. Amen..
Just need a Tune!
Posted 7 Years Ago
A beautiful Senyru ... an umbrella made for two...
Never blue ...
Rainbows are coming and bluebirds will
sing, Forever with you.. Amen..
Just need a Tune!
my son's name is Love and I am always with him
Posted 7 Years Ago
my son's name is Love and I am always with him
7 Years Ago
Really? You named him Love? How adorable.
Nice use of words and thoughts. A umbrella. Can make two people become closer. I liked the complete poem and the positive ending. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
Nice use of words and thoughts. A umbrella. Can make two people become closer. I liked the complete poem and the positive ending. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Not one of your more profound Haikus, but charming and cosy. It brought a smile to my face.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Not one of your more profound Haikus, but charming and cosy. It brought a smile to my face.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Well, thank you, AJ. :)
This is cute - Mine keeps blowing inside out ;p
Good one Ana :D
Posted 7 Years Ago
This is cute - Mine keeps blowing inside out ;p
Good one Ana :D
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
LOL...I've had that happen before.
This has that classic picture of two people in love out for a walk in the rain underneath the umbrella. Nothing else matters but that moment. Nice work Anastasia
Posted 7 Years Ago
This has that classic picture of two people in love out for a walk in the rain underneath the umbrella. Nothing else matters but that moment. Nice work Anastasia
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Doesn't it, though? Ah, yes...
This is a very sweet poem Anastasia, explaining the sizzling love chemistry between two people!
Amazing haiku! :)
Glad to see you writing :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
This is a very sweet poem Anastasia, explaining the sizzling love chemistry between two people!
Amazing haiku! :)
Glad to see you writing :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Of course! Poetry is the fruit of Love!
7 Years Ago
That's true :D
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Added on April 30, 2017
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Stacy Purvis Columbus, OH
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Altruistic Enigmatic Polymath | Writer, Poet, Actress, Musician, EMT, CNA, Phlebotomist. I'm an Artist. I paint pictures of the verbal kind.☕️❤️ 333
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