I feel as though some of the magic of this piece was lost on me simply for the fact that I got hung up on the words "Destino" and "Kismet". I would be very interested in some insight behind why you chose this words and what they mean. Other than that, I found it to be an attractive length. Well done. Write on.
-Rynn
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Hello, Rynn...I see you missed my message.
Please watch this, and you will understand.
.. read moreHello, Rynn...I see you missed my message.
Please watch this, and you will understand.
Here you go, my inspiration for this piece: https://youtu.be/BO8ffgDbM80 "Destino", 2003 Walt Disney & Salvador Dali
I feel as though some of the magic of this piece was lost on me simply for the fact that I got hung up on the words "Destino" and "Kismet". I would be very interested in some insight behind why you chose this words and what they mean. Other than that, I found it to be an attractive length. Well done. Write on.
-Rynn
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Hello, Rynn...I see you missed my message.
Please watch this, and you will understand.
.. read moreHello, Rynn...I see you missed my message.
Please watch this, and you will understand.
Here you go, my inspiration for this piece: https://youtu.be/BO8ffgDbM80 "Destino", 2003 Walt Disney & Salvador Dali
You know I love the short little poems you create, but I would love to read a long poem. With talent like this you could easily create something stunning.
This one struck me in a good way, here I was going through my read request and there has been a trend of dark or negative poetry. Don't get me wrong I love dark poetry but like blues music too much can put a shadow on your soul and darken your outlook. Your poem brought back the light for me even though it is raining outside I have a glow in my heart. So thank you for helping blow the gloom from my thoughts, I hope everyone takes the time to read this and it does the same for them it has done for me. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!