Burning

Burning Heart Of Mine 

My Soul On Fire For You

The Only Desire

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Reviews

[mercy party]

I really enjoy this format, you do this well. It almost reads as a riddle. What i get out of it is the idea of being true to yourself and your own passion. nicely put!

[Bear]

The only desire? I have acquired many interest that have ignited a flame inside me and in is named passion which would have been a good title for your poem. Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[wordman]

you painted it well,i can feel it

[Aubrey Harrell]

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) Beautiful :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

[Stacy Purvis]

I know you Are! Ha! 😉

[Aubrey Harrell]

Aww thank you! Just it was just beautiful not another word could describe it any better.

[Stacy Purvis]

You are all so ahhhmazing and supportive! Thank you so much! xxx

[Richard simpson]

I like it. It's cool and short and loveable. Great job!

[duff]

A path of determination. I like it. Nice work

[Grace]

I have been there.to may times

[Farhan Shaikh]

It is a good haiku..
Your haikus are really nice

[Surya]

A much needed haiku for a heart break...
I never used haiku, but I tried it reading multiple times and I got some message...
I enjoyed write..:)