Ode To Coffee

Just a morsel in reference to my Love affair with Coffee <3

Ode To Coffee, That Frivolous, Daunting Liquid

50 Shades To Cure Your Pain

An Open IV Right Into My Vein.

Ode To Coffee In All It's Dark Splendor

Flirting With Danger And Full Of Lust

Beckoning With Flavor, Each One Robust

Ode To Coffee Without Which I'd Be Dead

My Cup Is Ready And Awaiting Your Hue

Au Revoir Until Then, I Bid Thee, Adieu. 

Reviews

[Rynn]

"Ode To Coffee, That Frivolous, Daunting Liquid
50 Shades To Cure Your Pain
An Open IV Right Into My Vein." - A good choice of Ode poem material. Some grammar things I noticed - you don't need to capitalize "that", "Daunting" and so on. Unless you've done it for aesthetic purposes. I notice that you've done it throughout the whole piece, so if It has a purpose - keep it. I applaud you're consistency.

"Ode To Coffee In All It's Dark Splendor
Flirting With Danger And Full Of Lust
Beckoning With Flavor, Each One Robust" - I don't usually care for a ton of rhyming in poetry, but I feel like the rhyming is not detrimental to the poems intent here. It's not distracting and I believe the words fit nicely.

"Ode To Coffee Without Which I'd Be Dead
My Cup Is Ready And Awaiting Your Hue
Au Revoir Until Then, I Bid Thee, Adieu. " - I like the playful tone of the piece. It's easygoing and fun to read.

Overall, I like that the piece only lasts about a sip of said coffee. Interesting description and word choice. Great ending. Thank you for the read, write on.

-Rynn

[The Exiled Wolf]

A delightful and humorous representation of coffee! "50 shades to cure the pain" and "Ode To Coffee In All It's Dark Splendor" are my favorite lines! I like how you change the meaning of "shades" from that famous movie, and your appreciation of the intriguing darkness of coffee. And of course, under heavy schoolwork, "Without which I'd be dead" is the exact representation of my current state. Love it!

[Stacy Purvis]

Thank you so much, Wolf.
Glad you enjoyed it! : )

[J Manuel]

A nice tercet piece on the power of this brewed drink many cannot live without. I like the rhyming scheme in connection to the last two lines of each stanza. I can see this on a billboard for marketing, great job.

[Stacy Purvis]

It's truly a life-saver! Thank you!
Glad you liked it! xxx

[Jes' Pi]

I am not the biggest fan of coffee, I like tea or latte more. But the poem is very cute.

[Stacy Purvis]

Tea and coffee are both enjoyable.
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!

[MarkAndTheOcean]

Nice little poem. Haha even bad coffee is better than no coffee at all, that's my motto.

[Stacy Purvis]

Thank you so much, Mark.
Cheers!

[Jessica Lima]

Haha. This is very clever! I had some coffee just recently myself. But I like mine with milk :). Very refreshing.

[Stacy Purvis]

I'm glad you liked it, Jess! : )

[duff]

Oh how would we function without this splendid treat lol! Your imagination to highlight a daily ritual succeeds wonderfully and a job well done.

[Stacy Purvis]

Thank you so much, Duff : )

[duff]

Absolutely! Anytime my friend:)

[Island Hippy]

A smooth blend, playful and very nice rhyming. Izzy

[Stacy Purvis]

Thank you, Izzy! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. This was so tasty to read 😀