Ode To Coffee

Just a morsel in reference to my Love affair with Coffee <3

Ode To Coffee, That Frivolous, Daunting Liquid

50 Shades To Cure Your Pain

An Open IV Right Into My Vein.

Ode To Coffee In All It's Dark Splendor

Flirting With Danger And Full Of Lust

Beckoning With Flavor, Each One Robust

Ode To Coffee Without Which I'd Be Dead

My Cup Is Ready And Awaiting Your Hue

Au Revoir Until Then, I Bid Thee, Adieu. 

Reviews

[Rynn]

"Ode To Coffee, That Frivolous, Daunting Liquid
50 Shades To Cure Your Pain
An Open IV Right Into My Vein." - A good choice of Ode poem material. Some grammar things I noticed - you don't need to capitalize "that", "Daunting" and so on. Unless you've done it for aesthetic purposes. I notice that you've done it throughout the whole piece, so if It has a purpose - keep it. I applaud you're consistency.

"Ode To Coffee In All It's Dark Splendor
Flirting With Danger And Full Of Lust
Beckoning With Flavor, Each One Robust" - I don't usually care for a ton of rhyming in poetry, but I feel like the rhyming is not detrimental to the poems intent here. It's not distracting and I believe the words fit nicely.

"Ode To Coffee Without Which I'd Be Dead
My Cup Is Ready And Awaiting Your Hue
Au Revoir Until Then, I Bid Thee, Adieu. " - I like the playful tone of the piece. It's easygoing and fun to read.

Overall, I like that the piece only lasts about a sip of said coffee. Interesting description and word choice. Great ending. Thank you for the read, write on.

-Rynn

[A. S. Lewis]

Simple and short, but still quite lovely. I particularly like the line "flirting with danger and full of lust/ beckoning with flavor, each one robust."

[Michael G. Smith]

Wow, it amazes me how much people rely on this drink as cleverly stated here. Although my wife and I don't drink ironically her family has a coffee farm in Dominican Republic.

[ReedWrite]

Perfect...I am a coffeeaholic as well, so this was a fun read. Nicely done.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love coffee too. 10 cups a day I drink. My favorite, South American and European dark coffee. I liked and understand the poem dear Anastasia for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Joey Nizz]

I enjoyed the rhymes and rhythm you blended into this fine coffee write.

Well done Anastasia :)

[wordman]

lol, i can relate,5 or 6 cups a day

[Surya]

Haha, I love it too, without coffee my pen hesitates to write..so I loved it..:)

[matrixmark]

Ode to Coffe.....imaginative title.
'50 shades to cure your pain' - nice tie in line.
The piece came across as thoughtful and had a nice smoothness to it. I liked the ending, it felt that like that's exactly how this piece should end.

Not much of a review I know BUT I am trying harder with the poems.

Good, flowing piece.

Mark.

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Sounds very poetic. Like jazz at midnight club. Very smoothly go over my ears. This is wonderful piece.

[Stacy Purvis]

Thank you! It's a pleasure.
Cheers! xxx

[aj milton]

Excellent: 'An Open IV Right Into My Vein.'

In the days when I used to drink 15+ cups a day that was what I really needed. Nowadays I'm less of an addict, but you capture the rich and varied nature of that great drink!

[Stacy Purvis]

Hehe
Thank you for your words of encouragement