Are We Enemies?

Liam, I thought we were friends

From beginning to end but

Lately you seem strange and distant

Your kisses don’t taste the same

And you can’t look me in the eye

When you touch those places

In me that only lovers do

 

Don’t put an ocean between us

Or exile me to an island secluded

In quiet desperation I wait for you

Without hesitation I take you

In the hopes that you and I might be

Allies

 

Liam, tell me how do you live

With the shadow of her inside?

The bond is broken but yet she stays

Weaving a web to keep you captive

Is there something that I’ve missed?

An elusive last piece of the puzzle

That I just can’t seem to find?

 

Don’t put an ocean between us

Or exile me to an island secluded

In quiet desperation I wait for you

Without hesitation I take you

In the hopes that you and I might be

Allies

 

Please tell me this is all my imagination

I want to believe every word you say

It’s getting harder with each and every day

Chase the shadows of the past away

Tell me that you want to be my friend

And not my enemy, and stay, in my heart

Forever….sweet love please stay.

 

Liam let the ghosts have peace

And come stay with me

I need you in my life

Come please stay

 

Don’t put an ocean between us

Or exile me to an island secluded

In quiet desperation I wait for you

Without hesitation I take you

In the hopes that you and I might be

Allies

Sweet love please stay…

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry dear Anastasia.
"Liam let the ghosts have peace
And come stay with me
I need you in my life
Come please stay"
I liked the complete poem and the above lines. Perfect use of words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Taz]

I loved the rhyme scheme in this poem it was beautiful, thank you for sharing this I was really impressed it is almost like I could hear the music in a song within my mind as I read it. Good job.

[mercy party]

this one actually felt catchy. it also provided a quick turn around as far as getting familiarized with the characters and their long history. great poem!

[Sammie Sanchez]

i like the repetition of the whole piece, the path of losing someone, well done

[Misterr Remeat]

I like the depths of this piece and could definitely would like to hear music to this.

[T0TS]

Liam, don't be...ugh...listen to her Liam! Liam stop being a , well, um, I was trying to be a cheerleader lol...nicely emotive write...stay, Liam...plus the poem was personalized. :)

[Giulia King]

This is amazing! In love with this one :)

[Broken Hearts]

Such emotion in every line drew me in. The sadness and longing between the words is so strong and heartfelt. Beautifully done!

[Joey Nizz]

Sad but beautiful, reminded me of something that i can relate too..
Thanks for sharing this.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

So wrenching and heartfelt... such genuine emotion in every line. "Sweet love please stay" i love how you used this line to keep drawing us in time after time. Thanks for sharing, keep it up