Love In The Key Of "C"

A song isn’t a song without lyrics or a melody.

A story isn’t worth reading without passion

The music enchants with audible parody

And words transcend in adventurous fashion

I am a symphony without a maestro, incomplete.

Write your score upon my heart, so dear

Direct the orchestra in musical whim, indiscreet

And with the click of the baton to start, no fear

Send your love as the lights begin to dim.

And as each note impacts my mind and soul,

The composition changes and fills me within

My inner being with you becomes whole.

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"And as each note impacts my mind and soul,

The composition changes and fills me within

My inner being with you becomes whole."

I loved these lines the most.. It's funny how we feel whole being with someone we crave to be with...

[Jonathan Osterman]

And words transcend in adventurous fashion.
Such a beautiful line. Its always great to see a story where love is associated with music. Really nice :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very thoughtful. I loved these lines
A song isn’t a song without lyrics or a melody.
A story isn’t worth reading without passion.

[Taz]

Most beautiful poem, rythem was a bit tripped but it was very well done.