Coffee, Sunshine, And You

Good morning, Sunshine
Sharing a coffee or two
Every day with you

Reviews

[Bear]

I am envious of those who are able to write meaningful haiku. I am anything but a person of few words so before I can finish I have thought of a word that sound better or a phrase closer to my meaning. You would think someone who has been writing for over five decades wouldn't have this malady, I know it makes you want to shake your head it does me all the time :~)
Oh, back to the poem, I love that you identified your subject with the name Sunshine rather that personalize it with a persons name it broadens the scope of potential readers to relate with it. I am not a coffee person I drink tea but even I felt inclined to set and have a cup with you this morning :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[LKBillips]

Sunshine always seems like a long lost friend after winter. Perfect timing for this. Nice!

[Warrior]

I want that
this is so short and beautiful I love coffee I love sunshine and everybody wants that person to love them too
I love this

[andrew mitchell]

a date with sunshine, perfect with coffee! nice work

[Blue Rivermoon]

I loved the simply of your haiku it gives a positive vibes

[mercy party]

It doesn't seem like too much to ask for. A very hopeful simple poem. I like it.

[yuhee]

What a wonderful way to start a day. This made me smile. Thanks

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice senryu....even when we wake up alone, we are not really alone, are we?
every day, nature wakes with us.

[wordman]

you painted a lovely image of love

[Diamond]

This is so pleasant. Being a big fan of my first coffee of the day in combination with the early rays of Sun. I enjoyed this little poem big time.

[Suhd]

Sweet. Pithy. Amazing. Beautifully expressed :)