Promises?

Waited On The Beach

Alone. You Never Showed Up.

Watched The Rolling Waves

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The sea, waiting and hoping. At least you had the sea. A wonderful poem of longing. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[dearstace]

Somewhere at the edge of a pier stands a lost soul waiting for that little girl on the swing. He'll wait an eternity to be with her.

[Stacy Purvis]

Waiting for you.

[Michael G. Smith]

I feel the loneliness in these three short lines.

[Jonathan Osterman]

Shows you dont need a lot of words to set a feeling and atmosphere. Very nice.

[Broken Hearts]

Beautifully captured moment.

[Taz]

Nicely done impressive description.

[duff]

Beautifully done. A hypnotic scene for the reader to get lost in.

[Paul]

Short and to the point. I enjoyed this. Well done!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and these are such lonely waves...
nicely done senryu...

j.

[APOORVA]

beautifully written...
you're amazing in this