Forevermore

Your heart beckons me to another time and place, 

A reminder of romance, of love, and a tender embrace. 

And I, captured like a moth to a flame, am paralyzed by your Light. 

Enraptured in your essence, I give up without a fight. 

I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see, 

The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. 

To which my heart dances with yours forevermore, 

So shall we dance ’til the early light of a days new morn.

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

Woah! Did I also name my poem forevermore? Hmmm... yes I did! :D
Very good poem Anastasia! A short and sweet poem, very sweet poem of yours!
"I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see,
The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. "
These are the best lines ever! Wow, so creative! Keep it up Anastasia! :)

[Stacy Purvis]

Yes, we both have poems with the same title, but different. I enjoy and love them both. 😊

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! I really loved your poem, tbh, it was a bit better and well worded than mine :) I also love both

[Stacy Purvis]

If you say so. I feel as though they are equally pleasing. xxx

[Mr.Writer]

Your work and many others works inspire me to write more :)

[Stacy Purvis]

Likewise! There is much passion and beauty to behold through another's eyes....

[Mr.Writer]

True that :)

[EcstaticEuphoria]

My heart fluttered to read this, such a great poem. Remembrance of those beautiful feelings, the time of pure joy and infatuation.

[Bare trees]

What affection you show here! I love the fluidity of the lines, how each infuses into the other. This should win a prize in my book. Remarkable writing.

[Stacy Purvis]

Oh...Bless your little soul. Thank you :3

[Hope]

So sweet, Anastasia!
The third line is quite catchy:)
Loved it, my friend

[Stacy Purvis]

Heh...thank you. Many blessings xxx

[Kittenincake]

"And I, captured like a moth to a flame, am paralyzed by your Light.
Enraptured in your essence, I give up without a fight.
I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see,
The very intimate and beautiful parts of me."

Wow, I love the imagery. The last line is incredibly sweet in a naive and vulnerable way. Reminds me of young love.

[Stacy Purvis]

Thank you all so much for your kind words! : )

[emmajoy]

Love is in the air, Spring is here.. passionate words drift the world to make music for all to hear!

Beautiful poetry, Anastatia, you create such lovely phrases, 'I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see, - The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. '

What more can a woman say to carry her lover's heart safe forever more!

[Broken Hearts]

"And I, captured like a moth to a flame, am paralyzed by your Light."
I love the way this line shows the destruction love can bring upon ourselves. This piece is definitely one of my favorites I've read. Amazing job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Old places and memories. They can sneak-up on us. I liked the honest and thoughts in the words. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jessica Lima]

I really enjoy your writing style. Particularly when you write more than three phrases *lol*. Great read!

[mercy party]

A poem that can bring you back , stop you in your tracks and make you feel what you felt decades ago to the point you feel it in the now, is a good poem.
:)