Woah! Did I also name my poem forevermore? Hmmm... yes I did! :D
Very good poem Anastasia! A short and sweet poem, very sweet poem of yours!
"I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see,
The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. "
These are the best lines ever! Wow, so creative! Keep it up Anastasia! :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Yes, we both have poems with the same title, but different. I enjoy and love them both. 😊
7 Years Ago
Thank you! I really loved your poem, tbh, it was a bit better and well worded than mine :) I also lo.. read moreThank you! I really loved your poem, tbh, it was a bit better and well worded than mine :) I also love both
7 Years Ago
If you say so. I feel as though they are equally pleasing. xxx
What affection you show here! I love the fluidity of the lines, how each infuses into the other. This should win a prize in my book. Remarkable writing.
"And I, captured like a moth to a flame, am paralyzed by your Light.
Enraptured in your essence, I give up without a fight.
I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see,
The very intimate and beautiful parts of me."
Wow, I love the imagery. The last line is incredibly sweet in a naive and vulnerable way. Reminds me of young love.
Love is in the air, Spring is here.. passionate words drift the world to make music for all to hear!
Beautiful poetry, Anastatia, you create such lovely phrases, 'I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see, - The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. '
What more can a woman say to carry her lover's heart safe forever more!
"And I, captured like a moth to a flame, am paralyzed by your Light."
I love the way this line shows the destruction love can bring upon ourselves. This piece is definitely one of my favorites I've read. Amazing job!
Old places and memories. They can sneak-up on us. I liked the honest and thoughts in the words. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
A poem that can bring you back , stop you in your tracks and make you feel what you felt decades ago to the point you feel it in the now, is a good poem.
:)