Sphere

With bated breath, beating heart, and opened mind,
We take our journey through space and time.

Encapsulated, spinning, and drifting fast,
The emptiness growing with each transversal blast.

And in the darkest confines we see,
The tiniest Light begins forming, slowly, then Universally.

Our hopes and prayers are realized here,
And illuminated, uniformly within the great suspended Sphere

Reviews

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Such a great piece and so much deeper than the surface. How much more is there to life, our existence, our spirit? It expands in all directions, limitless and yet captured here, right now by space and time. So small and yet profound, really struck a chord for me, keep sharing!!

[Taz]

You really captured the essence of the world, good job.

[Michael G. Smith]

There are so many interpretations here. I imagined two from this wonderful piece; faith renewed watching a birth of star and also two procreators experiencing pregnancy.

[Bear]

As I read this images of mankind's arrival upon earth comes to mind. Very though provoking and just maybe insightful of our future. Well done my friend Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Joey Nizz]

" in the darkest confines we see,
The tiniest Light begins forming, slowly, then Universally" I like this part, stuck or lost in the darkness till hope comes with its light.
Well wrote *Thumbs up*

[wordman]

our souls to the great unknown

[mercy party]

This felt hopeful. I really enjoyed this write. Pretty amazing this sphere of ours!

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem.
"Our hopes and prayers are realized here,
And illuminated, uniformly within the great suspended Sphere"
I liked the above lines. I believe all things happen for a reason. Destine path or a final ending. We find the person and place we need to be. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"The emptiness growing with each transversal blast."

I liked this line the most! This write definitely makes the reader think.. Good work 👍

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. I want to travel too. 😀 beautifully written I loved it.