Nature

an old poem for the school mag.

The flowers are blooming

The children are laughing

The sun is smiling at us

The rivers are flowing

The mountains are calling

The birds are soaring high up in the sky

The trees are whispering

The moon is shining

The clouds are rumbling in the sky

The sea is rolling

The fruits are ripening

The fish are swimming in the water

How wonderful the nature is

It gives you company when you are lonely

So, isn't the nature friendly????

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Sweet poem of nicely simple sentiments...truly kind...

[GuineaPig]

yes, i like it! great poem. I like the imagery. but one suggestion- maybe take off some question marks at the end, so there's only one.
otherwise, great work!