Smile

This poem is nothing actually. I wrote it within 45 minutes for a competition. So it's no good at all. Still I want to share. :)

SMILE

On a gloomy day;
When the world is upside down
A bright colourful smile
Cheers someone up.
Between the drops of rain
Sun rays seem to pop out;
With gleaming flashy teeth
Brightens someone up.
With twinkling eyes
And dimpled cheeks,
Make someone's day;
While a simple word of love
Can spread a smile over someone's face.
Someone kind wipe the tears off
Making someone laugh with a silly joke;
A loving hug and a kiss
Keeps a smile on someone's face for the day.
Mothers would comfort their child
Making them happy at the darkest hours;
Fathers would cuddle his child
At the saddest time making them happy;
Siblings would keep tickling on
Till a smile shines out on their face;
A lover would make things special
When their significant other is down.
A smile can do wonders to the people we love,
And to the people who love us.
A magical spell like smile spreads in a jiffy
Leaving an instant feel of happiness all together.

Author's Note

Please comment though I know it's a piece of shit.

Reviews

[Riya.G30]

I agree..I had to focus on the word SMILE..so had to use it quite often..thank u:)

[Mauricio Montoya]

I think its petty good actually little to many repeats on the same word but overall not bad for 45 min