Guide me

Guide me

A Poem by Sashalee

I am lost in this journey 
Trying to figure out what my purpose is here

Why am I here?
What am I suppose to do?
Where do I go?
These are the question I ask daily

I feel like i'm lost..

© 2011 Sashalee


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Oh gosh.. I've been feeling this way lately... Thanks for writing this. I can relate.
Feeling lost and not knowing what to do.. is hard. Something we all go through at some point i think.. but yes, we are guided when we are this spot.
Fantastic poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Short and understandably horrifying to feel this way. Feeling lost is not a pleasant feeling, overall and in general. And the words sound so as you've pinned them down. very nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sometimes I think we are all ships at sea. Rocked by the winds of fate and scoured by the storms of change. There will always be times that we have no wind to fill our sails, and we have to row for a while. But I believe that as long as we have faith in ourselves, the currents of the great ocean shall guide us to where we are meant to be.

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is great! The urging to know something but you just don't find it. Keep up the good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I totally relate to this as so many others before me do. Nice one sashalee!


Posted 12 Years Ago


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I think a lot of people enjoy this poem because we can all strongly relate to it and the feeling of being lost. Its really lovely! Well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


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awwwww.... such a gentle piece. I liked thew lovingly used words and this poem just make the reader travel through writers confusion and misery. Great Job!.. really makes me feel to lend you a help. :I
Nicely Done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh gosh.. I've been feeling this way lately... Thanks for writing this. I can relate.
Feeling lost and not knowing what to do.. is hard. Something we all go through at some point i think.. but yes, we are guided when we are this spot.
Fantastic poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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p.s you will always be guided and if no one will stick thier hand out to help i think i can stick my hand through the computer screen to lend a helping hand. :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i know the feeling to be lost and not knowing purpose it really haunts you for days doesn't it? SCARY and great poem :)

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