Kissing Silk

 

Your arms fill the gaps of my body

My head rest on your shoulder

You are so warm...

 

I close my eyes

You close yours as well

 

I feel your lips on my neck

I feel your breathing

I feel your heart

 

Your lips make its way towards my cheek

I smile

Now your lips are pressed against mine

 

Your lips are so soft

Your lips fit perfectly with mine

Your lips are silk...

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Rea]

you portrayed the imagery beautifully here. I felt it!!! felt like something was tugging at my heart when i read this, in a good way:) this is a beautiful piece of writing in the sense that, love and passion is something that everybody can put to words, but to give a soul to your writing, to give feeling to it that's something not many excel at, and you have managed to do that.

[Draven]

A great romantic image. I love it. Great job. Lol, ur little dancing girl is dancing in sink with the song im listening to. : )

[Cassie Fraga]

very nice with compassion... love the easy feeling from this piece!!
great read!!

Love the ending... it is well thought, beautiful...

[T]

I'm impressed by your ability to take a simple act and make it tangible to the reader. Your description of being lost in desire's serenity is a moment in time we can all peer into and see clearly. Nice writing.

[Boldpen]

Nicely written.... The words were wonderfully chosen to describe and portray the feeling of love and attachment.
Like you always do... this poem was nicely penned.

[André-J-Franklin]

Love it you turn a simple moment such as a kiss into something truly romantic moment. I can say this has really inspired me with my story, you should check it out something by this is a very beautiful piece. Keep up the good work and don't like anyone tell you otherwise.

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beautiful piece of writing very potent and yet realistic almost fantasy like :)

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

^^ This was sweet and ever full of the warmth that love can bring. Wonderful wite!!

[Arielle Ann]

ha ha...loved the end..I was wondering when the silk would feature after reading the title!