The concept of Love?
A Poem by
Sashalee
I hardly know you
You hardly know me
I feel this bond though
This feeling..
What is this feeling?
© 2011 Sashalee
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It's short and simple, but that is why I like it.
Love isn't something that is long and complicated, it really is just something short and simple. A feeling.
The last line shows how one can possess this feeling, yet not know it themselves. And the poem as a whole shows the feeling itself.
Great write
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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The beauty about love
is that some things
Will always remain a mystery...
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*sigh* All I can do is continue hoping to run into that someone for me.
Posted 13 Years Ago
The beauty about love
is that some things
Will always remain a mystery...
`
*sigh* All I can do is continue hoping to run into that someone for me.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
awww short but sweet!
Posted 13 Years Ago
awww short but sweet!
Short but potient and the question is eerie. We all ask. We all want to know. Always wonderful with what you write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Short but potient and the question is eerie. We all ask. We all want to know. Always wonderful with what you write!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
It's short and simple, but that is why I like it.
Love isn't something that is long and complicated, it really is just something short and simple. A feeling.
The last line shows how one can possess this feeling, yet not know it themselves. And the poem as a whole shows the feeling itself.
Great write
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's short and simple, but that is why I like it.
Love isn't something that is long and complicated, it really is just something short and simple. A feeling.
The last line shows how one can possess this feeling, yet not know it themselves. And the poem as a whole shows the feeling itself.
Great write
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Short but it's the thought that counts! keep up the good work and hopeful you find out what's that feeling :).
Posted 13 Years Ago
Short but it's the thought that counts! keep up the good work and hopeful you find out what's that feeling :).
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I wouldn't really call it a poem but it does leave you pondering .
Posted 13 Years Ago
I wouldn't really call it a poem but it does leave you pondering .
such pondering questions of new... I can dig it!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
such pondering questions of new... I can dig it!!
I've started asking that question after I felt love. Now I don't know what it is.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I've started asking that question after I felt love. Now I don't know what it is.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 30, 2011
Last Updated on November 30, 2011
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Sashalee , La La Land
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My name is Sasha and I am 18 years old. I love to draw and im a huge game freak; I write short stories and poems on my free time :)
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