Black paper moon

I have so much pain in me

But their so blind to see

I grin through it all

Hoping one day I won't fall

My heart is withered and old

My skin is pale and my eye's are cold

I walk with my head down

I talk but there is no sound

Things aren't going well for me 

Then again..

You don't see what I see

Reviews

[C.A.Jordon]

i can definitely relate great metaphors

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww wow, I can relate to this poem so well!!!! Amazing! So much pain! -sigh- I know how it feels...
Quite short but a powerful piece. =) Well done!

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Always captivating to a chilling tone.
Toushed the marrows of my bones in a grasp so suffocating at the relization that I've felt like this before, i too many times.

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gah! captivation of heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) great job.

[Nihilum]

I love it :)
Powerful.

I love souleater! :)

[En.Ki]

Leaves me wondering what I don't see. Intriguing and metaphorical.

[Boldpen]

Extremely lovable piece.
The flow touched my heart. It was sooo impressive!
The feelings were tracing right to my soul.
Very well done!