Bride to be..

 

I slip into my white dress

I wonder what your doing?

Are you having trouble putting on your tie?

Oh you

 

My hair brushes against my shoulders

I smile as I see myself in the mirror

Everyone stares in awe

 

I make my way towards the aisle

I walk down slowly

There you are smiling

With your tie crooked

 

I cant wait to spend my life with you..

 

 

Reviews

[Indigo Ribbon]

This poem is adorable! The tenderness and innocence which the bride feels is expressed wonderfully =]

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love this soooo much!!! The love of being a bride is shown well here. A moment in time where we girls look up to... dream.. and just daydream of sometimes.. lol. Great write! I enjoyed this so much.

[ToxicMelody]

AW! I LOVE THIS! It's just so sweet and cute and ADORABLE! The imperfection of this makes me squeal in happiness! Love! Sorry, going a bit crazy over here.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a tenderness here... those beautiful moments of waiting... of breathing in another. You've written a moment of pure joy.

[Hoosier Belle]

Awe, so beuatiful. Enjoyable to read!

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

cute... you got a typo (you're)... and thanks for the review, cassandra/sashalee