Black Blood

Short Story

 

 

  The girl sat by the window, her head leaned against the cold glass. she let out a

small sigh as her finger tips scraped against the glass softly. "You think he's ever

going to come back Mr.teddy?" she looked at her bed, the teddy bear stood there leaning against the purple pillow. The girl picked up her long dirty white dress and made her way to the bed, she stared down at the stuffed bear. "Mr.teddy?" she stared at the bear as though waiting for it to answer, but it didn't; it stood there with its dark black button eyes and expressionless face. She began to get frustrated, she picked the teddy bear up and smiled. "Ofcourse you cant talk..." The girl opened her mouth. Blood began to spew out landing on the teddy bear, as though not satisfied tentacles came out of her mouth. The tentacles wraped around the bears neck and squeezed, as though it was a snake squeezing its innocent prey.

Reviews

[Nathaniel12]

i love this great poem but kindly have to say it sounds like a short storie maybe you should put it under short stories otherwise i give it four thumbs up :D

[Boldpen]

Wow!!! A very engrossing piece with a heart throbbing ending. Words were so finely chosen that reader can clearly picture the scene.
A very good write indeed.
Loved it.

[Nox]

I very surprised by the end of the paragraph. Good job. It was very interesting and kept my attention.

[Death Girl]

This is amazing you should put this in the contest all writing. you could possibly win.