Letter to Guns

You are Metal formed to fit in our hands 

to protect us from our so called enemies.

But i feel as if Its so easy to grip and 

load  you with no sense of consequences.

Irrelevant emotions makes a blind man

Pulling your hammer back. 

CLICK CLACK

You have our Elders slowly watching us 

stand agaisnt each other, seeing 

us get our hands wet of others life. 

Every where we go we see stains 

of anothers pain on concrete.

Changing a childs life because

materialistic dreams lead our drive. 

And you seem like our resolution because 

youre just a quick solution to our pain.

We are trying to move up in the world 

as whole but youre dragging us down.

because this hate in us seems contagious.

We try to get together after tears have 

fallen to stand strong and to stand against.

But It seems that no matter how long it takes

to look from our left to right there you are and

there goes another one. BANG BANG

Reviews

[Dutch Jr.]

I really like this. We've created a monster in these forms of weaponry and it has bred a culture of violence and hatred in our society. You describe the action of killing so poetically and so creatively in this work.

"get our hands wet of others life"

I loved that line, never heard it described in that manner.

You pointed out that our materialism leads our drive to utilize these tools of murder, and it couldn't be more true. You've personified the gun and made him the breeder of a generation of greedy, ruthless human beings. Great job.

[PoeticVibe]

Thank you so much.

[Nermeen]

Amazing Job :)
I love it alot

[PoeticVibe]

thanks. :-)

[Nermeen]

ur most welcome

[Richard Layne]

There are good lines in here. "You are metal.." "Irrelevant emotions" and the Bang bang ending.

[PoeticVibe]

thank you.