You

What did you do ?

What did you do to my heart?

Actually , what did you do to my entire system ?

My entire brain cells ? My organs ?

Its like the first day you walked into my life .. your heart buried itself inside of me ..

Inside every single organ of my body ..

You .. You .. wow you have this huge affect on me ..

its unbelievably amazing that words fail to describe it ..

I can't even describe it ..

nor my heart can ..

Your eyes ..

Your smile ..

Your smell ..

Your lips..

Everything in you is tattooed in my head .. in my heart ..

Everywhere I go ..

There you are ..

An image that's playing in my head every single second of the day ..

I love you ...

Yes..I do ..

&  love every single part of you ..

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

WOW my friend you out did your self I simply love this.



So much love and romance and like you're intrigued and Fascinated
with this being you're in love with.





I loved these Stanza's lines here.




What did you do ?

What did you do to my heart?

Actually , what did you do to my entire system ?

My entire brain cells ? My organs ?

Its like the first day you walked into my life .. your heart buried itself inside of me ..

Inside every single organ of my body ..

You .. You .. wow you have this huge affect on me ..

its unbelievably amazing that words fail to describe it ..

I can't even describe it ..





Blessings. kindred poet

[Sasha]

Oh wow ! Thank you ! :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome my friend. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet

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I love songs that no artist ever made magical:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Blue]

Thoughts of a highly-infatuated person. Been there, done that. You penned how it feels when one is in the heights of "romance."

[Sasha]

Thank you ! Appreciate it ! =D

[DrD]

You have some metaphors that are truly enchanting and delightfully original. I have browsed your work and there is something wonderfully personal in it all that finds a way to relate to the reader's own experiences. Very well done.

[Sasha]

oh wow you made my day ! :)
Thank you !

[one sky]

So emotional. Indeed when we love, we love everything about the person and it's like being etched in our heart forever...
Nice piece.

[Sasha]

Thank you! :)

[vaishnavi]

very good
its perfectly mentioned keep it up :)

[Sasha]

Thank you :)

[vaishnavi]

your welcome

[Allen Smuckler]

Great emotion and honesty Sasha
Hard not to root for you and your love…
Well done
allen

[Sasha]

Thanks Allen !
Appreciate it !