I Need A Hero

 I  just met you two days ago ..

and I cant seem to get you out of my head..

your smile ..

Art ..

your lips ..

your eyes ..

Everything about you ..

I never felt like this before ..

My heart wants to jump out of me .. and run to you ..

I need someone like you ..

To make my heart happy after all its pain ..

I need a hero ..

to swap me off my feet..

to make me feel different ..

to color my world ..

shine in on me with his smile ..

and simply be himself ..

I want you to be my hero ..

I want you to be mine ..

and I want "us" to create our own story..

The story I will tell to everyone when I am old ..

I just hope we have a good one ..

Reviews

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Wow that was so beautiful! Song was as well! My gosh that puts me in a deeper feel rite now to write! Beautiful work:)

[Sasha]

Thanks Jon ! Appreciate your feedback ! :)

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Your very welcome Sasha:)

[Mia C.]

I love this, it describes how I feel about the man I fancy. You're an amazing writer and I hope to read more from you soon. :)))

[Sasha]

Thanks Mia ! Totally Appreciate it ! =D

[Mia C.]

You're very welcome!! :)

[Jack...]

Nicely penned Sasha. Here's hoping that hero walks into your life

[Sasha]

Thanks Jack! Hope so too ! :)

[Dye]

Very beautiful poem Sasha. It doesn't take much time......when you know, you know.

" I want you to be my hero ..
I want you to be mine ..
and I want "us" to create our own story..
The story I will tell to everyone when I am old ..
I just hope we have a good one .."

I really like that last part.

[Sasha]

Thanks Dye ! True !
Thanks ! =)

[Sami Khalil]

"I need someone like you ..

To make my heart happy after all its pain ..

I need a hero ..

to swap me off my feet..

to make me feel different ..

to color my world .."

I feel strongly the surety of your desires and the creation of your relationship. You know what you want in other words...Splendid...:)

[Sasha]

Thanks Sami !! I can't believe that this all can happen from one simple look ... wow ..

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)

[Sasha]

One conversation and One Look can do wonders my friend .. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wonders and miracles...:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Positiveness in the lines and a new transformation...seems has found you with a budding relationship and how you want to carry this fortune to the next level...and how profound this ideal person has made you feel in just two days time...

[Sasha]

my gosh you can't imagine .. My heart is dancing from happiness ! Thanks for your feedback !

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...