Prayer

Prayer

 

my prayer is that everyone in the world

can know this kind of love and be healed by it

repeat every word I say exactly as I say it

words have set meanings for a reason

even though your spirit has broken and

the mournful music of the strings

revives old flowers old hopes  

no excuses, no tears only

hold your breath waiting

for the final smile from

eternity on all of us

tears of rain are

running down

my window

pane

time

is short

bless

you

Reviews

[Chris]

This one I need to think on for a bit...

[sasha]

okay, Chris, thank you for your time..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i find this inspirational...one day if we can all feel that refreshing drop of rain...the healing one...the final smile from eternity through tears of joy...

like the shape of the poem and the shape of the theme.

[sasha]

thank you for reading, Jacob, your feedback so gentle and romantic..