Schoolyard

Sparkling snow

Long shadows from birch trees

Symphony of rhythms

 

Sunny schoolyard in March

Kids play wallow in the snow

Tutor feels desolate

 

Lost in thoughts he enjoys

Listening to the sound of the wind

Sighing in the trees

Reviews

[sasha]

Hi MoriartyMesa; thank you for the post and dropping by!

[MoriartyMesa]

I think the breath of tutor and pupil is needed, nice work.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but eventually it will get cold, the kids will come inside and the tutor will be busy again...and then instead of feeling desolate, will miss the sighing in the trees.

i am a teacher...so this one struck a chord with me...

the students would much rather run and play...even the older ones like i teach in community college.

nicely imaged.

[sasha]

Jacob, I am a teacher, too. You can easily imagine the tutor watching his school kids playing in the schoolyard after dinner..

Thank you for stopping by.

[sasha]

thank you, Spunkyleo! it was important for me, your words!

[spunkyleo]

a very gorgeous and descriptive poem! good job :)