A Mistake

This is actualy written in a traditional form of poem in my country.It usually consist of one verse with four lines but it also can be use in a replying from like thsi. So basically this poem is about two bestfriend having a conversation

          A Mistake

Gazing at the cloud above

I see  shapless form, they make

My friend, these are words of love

I have made a mistake

 

See the shapless cloud

is not shapeless after al

Afraid of saying this

What mistake do you recall

 

The shapes you see

are nothing but a mind trick

Saying this, I want to flee

I stole your hot chick

Author's Note

Remember, each verse is a dialog

Reviews

[Theresa]

The last line made me laugh. You say it's dialogue, yet I see it just as a poem with lines that flow well. It's different and I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.