An unrequited love

An unrequited love

A Poem by Sarrah

From the moment I wake up to the moment I sleep
All my thoughts are of you indeed
But It gets me wondering whether u think of me or am I just another thought or dream
My words know no end for you
They just flow like my tears when I think of you
I saw u looking at her
The way i wished u looked at me
And all i could do was watch my world burn to ashes
How lucky does someone have to be In order to be loved back by the person u would start a war for ?
How lucky does someone have to be in order to not spend their lives wondering what could have been?
Maybe i needed more courage
Or maybe i needed more love
To lure him in to show him how good it could have been
But sometimes for some people love is just 5 minutes of pleasure for life time of pain
And that someone is me.

© 2024 Sarrah


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i find your feeling of unrequited love commendable because of it emotions
that resonates well, the last line had a twist i never expected, it seems like lust
or maybe resignment

Posted 5 Hours Ago


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Sarrah
Sarrah

India



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I'm an 18 year old poet who doesn't even consider herself a poet yet. She wants to learn from what the world has for her and she's wishing to be just as great as you one day. Hoping that I'll find me .. more..

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