I FELL IN LOVE

a poem i wrote due to my unspoken thoughts for him.

It was all of a sudden,

When my heart stopped beatin'.

I never expected it to happen,

But I was already fallin'.

Butterflies in my stomach,

When his gaze I catch.

He's the apple in my eye.

If I can't see him, I sigh.

Happiness is with him,

No loneliness it seem.

Everytime is meaningful,

No time is awful.

How lovely this feeling is,

When love become bliss.

I fell in love,

I truly have.

Author's Note

I just posted my first poem online to be read by many. I used to write poems before but only I read it. I usually kept them all. So, i love to read any comments about it. Thanks :)

Reviews

[Babe Roxx]

Kamusta...I enjoy reading Love in its infancy, it reminds me of a love I once had...a really good poem that you conveyed your emotions for this lucky guy...a nice poem to post as your first. :)

[Charmy]

thank you for the compliment. it inspires me to make another poem. another heart felt one. :)

[Babe Roxx]

You should...see where your spirit takes you in your words...the adventure as poets is all our own until we share it...then your adventure inspires others to write for their own.

[Babe Roxx]

You are most welcome. :)

[Charmy]

Noted Sir! Thanks again! :)