I am not like the stars - 2015

a random poem

the Sky

is open,

grey,

and lonely.

the Sky is just like me.

the Moon

does not 

get a chance

to see the 

Sun.

the moon is just like me.

the Stars,

oh, I envy

the Stars,

for they play

all night

joyfully.

I wish I was like the Stars.

Author's Note

enjoy.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the journey in your words to the perfect ending. I agree.
"oh, I envy
the Stars,
for they play
all night
joyfully."
Would be nice to be like the stars. Free and shining above without control. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[silverwritinggoddess]

I think you are like the stars, shining brightly with your poems! I'm saying this because it's true! Great job! I'm going to read more of your poems.

[SariahM]

My two newest poems... well, you would like them.

[. . .]

I have read a few of your poems and I appreciate this one in particular. Thanks.

[SariahM]

Thank you! what other poems of mine have you read?

[. . .]

The first 5 listed on your profile. I also really enjoyed Fire of Your Soul.

[SariahM]

Thank you!

[ExquisiteEyes]

A short poem but you have conveyed your feelings properly. Well done.