An Isolated Dog

An Isolated Dog

A Poem by Saravanan Evu
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The Pain Of Memories In Love

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When i lost my faith,
you lit up the light 
in my life.And it brings
up the faith back
to my life.
You made me smile
on those days that were 
like hell in my life.Because
i saw my heaven in your eyes.
Lost of solitude, of my darken
dreams are now in the shine.
Because you are the one who
brings hope on mine.
You gave all the things 
to my life.And left me alone
in the lane of life.
Now I'm stumbling upon
to lit the light again in my life.
Because my heart asking me, 
how can i?
lit it again when my love 
was not with mine.
Everyday my heart is telling
me to hold your hand.
But,how can i?
Cause you baby gone away
from me now.
All those days were 
just going to be memory.
Like a star which lost it's glory.
And now I'm alone 
in the lane of my life
with a broken wing.
So I'm just barking like 
a dog about the pain
which last long to be
forever in my heart.
May love shut the light of my life.
But it can't shut you down 
from my heart.
Cause you are the only one
i want in my life until the 
rest of my life.
- FIN -  

© 2015 Saravanan Evu


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Without having love we are nothing. We need it like we need breathing. Very well written. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's so hard to let go of someone we've loved, but that's how we know our love is true. So powerful

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I agree with other review, we can't just remove someone from
our minds and hearts! Sad piece but well written, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
We never really remove someone from our hearts.
There will always be something that reminds us.

Gone but not forgotten...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I got your read request! I like how you wrote about your faith is guiding you back almost, and in the end your faith becomes your love, very sincere.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I'm glad to visit and read your work, sir...Pen on...:).

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Ok. You are welcome...:).....
I have enjoyed reading it a lot! Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing!
-Anjana

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Raja Anjana Kothapalli

9 Years Ago

You're Welcome! :D
I really enjoyed reading this. Sense of sadness of loss. Very relatable.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I really liked it. Very enjoyable! Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
ashleymarie

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Great expression of emotion. I can picture the light being lit and then shut out.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Saravanan Evu
Saravanan Evu

Chennai, India



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