A Fairy Sparrow

A Fairy Sparrow" - A poetry about The Pursuit Of Life's Journey

Rain starts to smile when,

dark clouds shuts down the sky.

A fairy sparrow starts to fly,

to found a place to hide.

But, when it starts to fly

Storm passes..!

Thunderstorms..!

so the fairy sparrow afraid to fly.

Then it sat on a dry tree,

his eyes were shed with tears.

Because his faith were shut with

full of fears.

When rain falls on his eyes,

it wipes the tears from his eyes.

And it realized to have faith 

on his life.

But it didn't bring hope 

to his life.

The drop of his tears 

falls on the flower bud which

was in the ground.

At the moment. 

A flower blooms with the smile

which carry thorns on his stem.

Fairy sparrow feels wonder

when the flower smiles.

And realized, it smiles because 

it carry the hope on his scope.

Then it wiped the tears 

from his eyes, 

and it hides the wounds 

in his life.

Fairy sparrow seeks his wings to fly

then it flies away in the sky 

with a smile.

Because faith and hope brings 

the courage to the scope 

of his life.

-FIN-

Reviews

[Confuser]

This is a beautiful story/prose writing and I love it - even though the wording is great with the rhyming and beautiful description so vivid in my mind; Love birds too (great metaphor). It a sweet, lovely journy to find happiness. Wow, I loved it. Keep writing. Thank you!

[Saravanan Evu]

Thanks a lot.

[Confuser]

Re-Read from contest; forgotten, loved it all over again!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing these words. :) Rudi

[Maskedthoughts]

Love the imagery! Great write :)

[Saravanan Evu]

Thank you.

[Rounak Jain]

Nice message drawn from nature. good read.

[Saravanan Evu]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

A meaningdful story. Thank you for sharing...:).......

[Saravanan Evu]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Deepika]

What an instance to depict the power of faith in life! I enjoyed reading:)

[Saravanan Evu]

Thank you.

[Emily]

Love your wording!
Great Work!

[Saravanan Evu]

Thamks a lot!