Damaged

Damaged

A Poem by Tangie

Damaged: Objects that have been affected some sort of way
Damaged: Something physically or mentally wrong with someone 

Am I damaged or Am I not
Mentally abused by others or myself
Self destruction that's what they call it

Criticizing yourself for every little mistake made by yourself
Praising others for there accomplishments 

When you look in the mirror what do you see.....
Not someone who's worth applause, for you've made no accomplishments
worth applauding, worth recognizing....

Others around you feeling your head with compliments 
Words of gold spilling out their mouths..... 
All the while you still only see the same sad little girl 
You ask yourself Am I damaged or Am I not..... 

© 2014 Tangie


Author's Note

Tangie
looking forward to reading your reviews :))

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a mirror ..very insightful... sometimes i go through the same.. i feel there is nothing worth that i am doing.. people praise you but you feel.. its just not worth it.. state of a mind which is confused with its own place... nicely written Tangie.. lots of emotions and fight within :)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tangie

10 Years Ago

thank you, I'm glad you can understand the concept of this poem.. I love your review :))



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We are our own worse critics....sometimes when we hear words of praise we know we don't deserve it only makes it worse.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tangie

10 Years Ago

yes... that's true...
a mirror ..very insightful... sometimes i go through the same.. i feel there is nothing worth that i am doing.. people praise you but you feel.. its just not worth it.. state of a mind which is confused with its own place... nicely written Tangie.. lots of emotions and fight within :)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tangie

10 Years Ago

thank you, I'm glad you can understand the concept of this poem.. I love your review :))
Lots of truth and foresight went into the makings of this piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tangie

10 Years Ago

thank you!

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Tangie
Tangie

Johnsonville, SC



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