I rise

I rise

A Poem by Tangie

I rise above everything that's ever happened to me, 
like when the birds learn how to fly high above the trees
I rise above everything that's ever happened to me in my pass 
But I remember those many nights my hearts shattered like glass
I rise above those doubts those many many doubts
But I remember those times those doubts made me feel down and out
I remember crying myself to sleep almost every night
I rise above those tears and made things right
I rise above my failures and my fears 
Just like when people learn to turn away from there pressuring peers
I rise above all that hate and I learned to forgive because life goes on and we all learn how to live
I rise above everything that has ever happened to me because life keeps going on and I am in control of how I want 
My life to be.....

© 2014 Tangie


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Tangie
looking forward to reading any type of review :))

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its like telling yourself this is what i want to be, better than the things that has hurt me, lots of optimism..we all live with certain fears and when we rise above them..we realize we are stronger than those things of past and the people who have constantly troubling us.. well written Tangie..:)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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its like telling yourself this is what i want to be, better than the things that has hurt me, lots of optimism..we all live with certain fears and when we rise above them..we realize we are stronger than those things of past and the people who have constantly troubling us.. well written Tangie..:)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is unique and so beautifully penned. Great poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tangie

10 Years Ago

Thank u so much :)
Beautiful! I liked the smart handling of similes and the flavour of optimism. Keep it up. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tangie

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
Md. Ziaul Haque

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Tangie
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Johnsonville, SC



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