Disappeared

This is about a friendship I had with someone, and then they were like "bye, I don't wanna be your friend anymore." I was just like "um. Well then."

Disappeared

Verse:
My mistake, I believed you when you said you loved me
My mamma said innocent until proven guilty
I should've known that love isn't a trial
Unless someone tells tall tales, and that's when you've been doing for a while

Pre-Chorus:
Love, love, love was all I ever felt
Now lies lies lies are what I see
You, you you come straight from hell
So take a bow you tricked me

Chorus:
You had me locked at hello
and lost me at goodbye
Everything in between
I guess it was a lie
Don't know why it was so sudden
There was nothing leading up
No eerie sky before the storm
Nothing but love
Seems like you wore a mask all these years
It didn't fade away slowly, it just disappeared

Verse:
Oblivious to the possible and probable ending
Didn't know it we'd see our last chapter because of your pretending
I thought I was your sun, was I not shining bright enough?
I would've liked a warning, you didn't have to cut me off

Pre-Chorus:
Your heart heart heart was all I ever felt
Now tricks tricks tricks are all I see
You you you come straight from hell
So take a bow, you made me believe

Chorus:
You had me locked at hello
and lost me at goodbye
Everything in between
I guess it was a lie
Don't know why it was so sudden
There was nothing leading up
No eerie sky before the storm
Nothing but love
Seems like you wore a mask all these years
It didn't fade away slowly, it just disappeared

Bridge:
Why did you have to walk out the door so quickly?
Just when I started to believe in your silly games
Give me a reason, you destroyed me after building me up
You could've made a better game if you didn't wanna play

Chorus:
You had me locked at hello
and lost me at goodbye
Everything in between
I guess it was a lie
Don't know why it was so sudden
There was nothing leading up
No eerie sky before the storm
Nothing but love
Seems like you wore a mask all these years
It didn't fade away slowly, it just disappeared

Outro:
It all disappeared
No clues to your lies
They all just untied
Mhm

Author's Note

Just to let you know, I got the first four lines from a post on tumblr. I asked the person who posted them if I could incorporate them into a song, and she didn't object.

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

Such a remarkable piece. It has obviously came from your heart and it empowers it alot. I took this excerpt :
You had me locked at hello
and lost me at goodbye
Everything in between
I guess it was a lie " - I think it sums up the relationship, just without the emotions that were involved. But fact that you said " I guess" means you somehow wish you are wrong, as if there is a reason kept hidden from you , and so from despair you choose the obvious-common reason.

I hope everything will be alright! and keep writing because you got the talent!

[Sarahthirk]

Thank you!!

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Can't even explain how amazing this is!! I can relate so much!! Love it!! :)

[Asilem]

I've definitely had this happen to me. Every time I think about it, the pain comes back, just as strong and powerful as the day it was injected into me. Great poem. :)

[Sarahthirk]

Thank you!