Dawn To Dusk

Dawn To Dusk

A Poem by Sarahthirk
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This is about when you're all happy and everything, and someone comes around and just wipes all your joy out of sight.

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Dawn To Dusk

Verse:
Guess this was your story, 'cause you just went and wrote the ending
When I read it it tore me apart 'cause you kept on pretending
I thought we were true, but baby this was a lie
You didn't tell me, was a I a fool for loving you all this time?

Pre-Chorus:
Everything I ever believed in, gone
Somewhere along this road, the turn we took was wrong

Chorus:
You turned my dawn to dusk
A never ending pit of black
You turned my blue sky to rain
Will the brightness ever come back?
Pacing all around the room
Hoping for a little luck
But I wouldn't be able to see it anyway
'cause you turned my dawn to dusk

Verse:
I'm just sitting here and sobbing, to the wall you put between us
You got away with the best parts of me, then left them right in the dust
Running out of oxygen, don't know if I'll ever regrow
If I do I won't let you in, 'cause everything you put on was a show

Pre-chorus:
The tears refuse to stop pouring out
Ever since you shut me out

Chorus:
You turned my dawn to dusk
A never ending pit of black
You turned my blue sky to rain
Will the brightness ever come back?
Pacing all around the room
Hoping for a little luck
But I wouldn't be able to see it anyway
'cause you turned my dawn to dusk

Bridge:
Heart broken beyond all repair
You took away all my air
No devil can compare
To your dark vacant stare
Why did you use your matches?
Now I'm just a pile of ashes
Sanity left in a flash, yeah
I guess I better go and try to catch it.
But

Chorus:
You turned my dawn to dusk
A never ending pit of black
You turned my blue sky to rain
Will the brightness ever come back?
Pacing all around the room
Hoping for a little luck
But I wouldn't be able to see it anyway
'cause you turned my dawn to dusk

© 2013 Sarahthirk


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Wow!! Absolutely amazing song!! I know exactly how you feel!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Review for Change the World Comp

Terrific opening line, setting the scene magnificently. You maintain the same balance of emotion all the way through with cleaver crafted lines that keep the words on track. Excellent craft and word-man-ship

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarahthirk

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Wow another great write. Very deep and powerful about how the words of others can destroy us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarahthirk

11 Years Ago

i appreciate it :)
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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Added on December 25, 2012
Last Updated on January 3, 2013

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Sarahthirk
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Hey! I'm Sarah. I write songs. My literary influences are Taylor Swift, Josh Kear, and Bono. Musical influences include Taylor, Carrie Underwood, U2, and Leona Lewis. I've been writing songs for a lit.. more..

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