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I can see the fire in your eyes

the fighting anger you're trying to hide

I quickly tell you to stay back and away

you have to live to die again another day

 

As my hopeless fight goes on

I feel new strength

when you touch my arm

 

why you can't let me fight alone?

it's you I'm trying to protect.

maybe this fight isn't so hopeless after all...

 

Reviews

[Daly]

Some of the beginning of your lines (especially at the last stanza) are uncapitalized (just letting you know). I can see a story here, maybe if you explain more about the characters and use literary devices to describe their emotions.

And I see you're an anime fan. Me too! :-)