Your sunshine

It's raining outside

but it makes me smile

because I know

you'll have to stay for awhile

 

We'll eat cookies and Ice cream

and snuggle on the couch

we'll watch T.V. too.

 

and even though it's cold outside

I feel the warmth of you

and even through the darkness

your sunshine still shines through..

 

 

Reviews

[Daly]

Aww...that's so sweet! I love the image you created of the speaker being with that person. Great poem, although there are some minor grammatical errors. On the first stanza, there should be a comma after the first line and on the second stanza, there should be a period or a semi-colon on the second line. Sorry if I'm picking on your piece, but I just want to help. :-)

[K. Carver]

i know who your talking about and its sweet....i really liked it...

[LilyGrace]

Sweet, rings of a kind of innocence. Nice.
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