FREE

You can't possibly hope to understand me

you'll never realize i need to be free

So how long will this go on?

Just how long can I stay strong?

I'm sick of fighting 

I'm tired of trying

I'm to stubborn to lose

I'm to weak to choose

between the real me 

and who you see

what else can I do?

I told this friendships over it's through!

I'm not as strong as I seem

but I can be stronger when I need to be

When will you get it?

When will you see?

I'll never trust you. 

so why trust me?

You'll never understand me

Why can't you see i just want to be free? 

Reviews

[Richy]

YAY!! I liked this one too but the other one is better... I think you missed up with something because it seems kinda strange to read...

"I told this friendships over it's through!
I'm not as strong as I seem"

I think you need a comma or something after over and before it's.
maybe, "I told you this friendships-" that might work better! ^-^ your welcome by the way

[PhoeniX]

i like this. sounds like there's a strong feeling of realization. there's only one small grammar problem.

I'm to stubborn to lose
I'm to weak to choose

the word 'to' is 'too' here on both stanzas. but other than that. this was a good write