Melody Evans
A Book by Sarah
 A young woman determined to find her lost friend joins forces with a madman to hunt down her friends captor  © 2013 Sarah
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I really want to do well with this story, so constructive criticism is wanted! Not only that but on a whole I would like to know things like: Overall did you like it? Was it a pleasure to read or did you get so bored that you almost fell asleep?
Things like that. And please help with grammar if you can.
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I really liked it great work.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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I really like your style of writing. work on your grammar though.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Author
Sarah
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I love writing stories. As a young person I thrive off of the impossible, and weaving different words together to create moments that capture you and transport you into another reality. I want to wr.. more..
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