Oh Sweet Creature of Mine

Oh dark creature 

in my brain

Will you converse with me 

once again

Oh morbid creature

I am scared

And only your comfort 

will help me there

For no one understands

my pain

And only your evil words

keep me sane

Oh dark creature 

cradle me

With your arms of death

only few will see

Oh evil creature

make me bleed

Claws against flesh

hurt me please

For I feel numb

without you

And you help me see

what i can get through

Take my hand

and hold it tight

For I am determined 

to die tonight

Oh sinister demon

I cleverly hide

So dark and twisted 

in my mind

Take me away

my wicked friend

So my life

can come to an end

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Yep I get this. I liked this rhyme you had here-
Take my hand

and hold it tight

For I am determined

to die tonight




Oh sinister demon

I cleverly hide

So dark and twisted

in my mind


Take me away

my wicked friend

So my life

can come to an end
It seems when we have this so called demon in our head we want to talk with it and get it out. You said it all perfect my friend.