Cold

And ever so swiftly

Her innocence was taken from her

Her heart became hardened and unresponsive

She hungered for that innocence but could never seem to gain it back

She was a statue in a graveyard

Beautiful but unable to love

Reviews

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

This is a really gripping you have here, Sarah. Everybody loses their innocence, rather it would be virginity, their youth, their love, their pride. But sometimes losing that innocence can be hard. Anyway, this was a very clever write. Can't wait to read some more from you.

[Steve L.]

Another intense poem from you!!! Really deep content.

[Roger Turgeon]

I like the analogy of the statue ( : O ) Maybe the statue can't love but it can be loved... something to remember