Listen

Even when it means nothing,

there's something in every hearts choices

On this path we try to hide

All our teardrops from their eyes

When you don't know what to do,

Don't know what to think about

Because you just don't know where to fall

But every wall seems to be up and around you

When nothing means everything,

And everything means nothing

Just take your hearts advice...

Because even if it hurts, it's what you want most...

And you just can't help what the heart has to say.

Reviews

[J. A. Svercek]

Interesting perspective. I definitely think it could be developed further, though--I don't find this piece very engaging. It's very "spoken word"-esque, but the words themselves lack the weight that could elevate the piece (however paradoxical this statement reads).

Thanks for writing,
J.