I hope I combust.

I hope I combust.

A Poem by Sarah Lynn

I can't handle anything.

I can't comprehend the world.

It all feels like static.

Everyone moves in slow motion.

Everyone's a blur.



And the harsh reality dawns on me.

That I mean absolutely nothing.

At all.

© 2011 Sarah Lynn


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Well you do to me because I'm thinking "Where the hell is she"...good god woman... I could have been pregnant with a litter by the time you show up.. ;) I love this as a raw and passionate piece...however I don't buy that your presence in the world goes unnoticed.. You mean something to me:) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I do not feel that is the truth at all...I am sure you are loved..maybe only distantly until some things need to change perhaps?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well you do to me because I'm thinking "Where the hell is she"...good god woman... I could have been pregnant with a litter by the time you show up.. ;) I love this as a raw and passionate piece...however I don't buy that your presence in the world goes unnoticed.. You mean something to me:) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sarah Lynn
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