Addiction

I can feel the poison rushing through my veins. 
I can feel my heart beat fighting through the day. 
This love. This fight. Your love. My might. 
There's an addiction tonight. 

Your love is my addiction. 
What keeps me going on. 
Your love keeps me breathing.
What keeps moving on. 

I can feel the fire on my skin. 
I can feel my blood boiling. 
Take me in. Give me a try. 
There's an addiction tonight. 

Your love is my addiction. 
What keeps me going on. 
Your love keeps me breathing.
What keeps moving on. 

When the time is right. 
We'll kill this fight. 
You can be my high. 
And, I'll be your ride tonight.

Reviews

[Lighthouse Call]

Good Write.
Nice work on rhymes.

[Ruth]

Addiction is a good word for love!
The force of loving someone is one of the most powerful emotions1
Nicely portrayed here!
xx

[M Garcia]

I think that most people see love as addiction. This was well thought out and well written.

[EverEmma]

Reminds me of Your Love is My Drug. I liked it alot. Take that fire and mix it with more intense words. That's a lethal combination. Keep working at it.

[Alex Thomas]

Very much like a song. Extremely song emotions of lust and desire. "There's an addiction tonight" in the first stanza is a bit out of rhythm in that part, but I still found this to be a very passionate read.

[Kelly Taylor]

I could picture a band singing this, it's written so well. It flows neatly and the metaphor is gripping.

[SimplyDisastrous]

This remind me of a song. I can't exactly remember the name, but I remember that I liked it, like I like this poem. It flows very nicely and it's filled with emotion. A job well done (: