Heaven

Heaven

A Poem by Sarah
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It is about heaven.

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Heaven is a place where people go.
They lose their bodies but their spirits stay.
Heaven is up above the world where no one can see,
Until they have no life to fulfil.


Heaven has no evil in.
People will of gone to hell for committing a sin.
Angels gather to show the good the way,
to give us a blessing each day.


Heaven is in the sky for people who die,
for a reason which we don't know why.
They may of been ill where there was no cure.
When someone dies, 
they have left their life and shut the door.

© 2016 Sarah


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Thank you for posting your nice poems. I would suggest changing the line "People will of gone to hell for committing a sin" to "People will have gone to hell for committing a sin"; I believe this is more grammatically correct.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Sarah
Sarah

Manchester, United Kingdom



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Hi. My name is Sarah and i am 33 years old. I live in the UK. I was born with two spinal conditions called Scoliosis and Spina Bifida Occulta. I enjoy eating out, shopping, going to social clubs, .. more..

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