Contradiction

Contradiction

A Poem by SarahLin
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more randomness from me, When I can't sleep I make this stuff up....

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I love you..
No..
I hate you
Get out!
Go away..
Where are you going?
Don't walk away from me!
I Love you...
Stop...don't touch me
Weren't you listening?
I hate  you..
I can't stand the sight of you
Don't turn away from me!!!
What are you doing
Wipe that smile off your face
Don't come any closer!
Let go of me
I said I hate you

I said don't touch me...
I said get out...
I said, I said...(sigh)
Don't ever let me go...
 Please stay.....
Are you listening?..
I love you....

© 2013 SarahLin


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Hahah, now i believe that you're really a very finniest one. I enjoyed reading this piece too. What a cool piece, i think, poor guy would've confused at the time when he was listening to you.. your beautiful words that praised him .. lol love's actually the same, whenever a hate comes love overlaps the pain. I loved the simplicity of the poem .. of yer very imaginative mind ..and of course i'd praise your clever mind too .. lol. You know what, the guy with whom your in love'd be getting scare of you before speak anything to you because you've already zipped his mouth with yer stunning words. you've here expressed your true love how much you do love him right from the depth of yer lovely heart. He'd be loving you, Sarah. Wonderful Artistry!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SarahLin

11 Years Ago

You seem to understand me. Thanks for taking the time to stop by...
Neon

11 Years Ago

Yeah .. I love understanding someone as most beautiful as you are .. your cool, Sarah.
WOW .... did u live on my block back in december ? cause i swear that was word for word what she was bending not only my but everyone with in 400 ft.s ear ....thats some real words girl ! u cant make that stuff up ...thank-you for your transparent truths ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Dye
What a collection of contradictions. lol I've been on both sides of this. That push and pull of a love hate relationship. I can't stand you, but please don't leave. Nicely penned!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SarahLin

11 Years Ago

Thank you Dye. I've been on both sides of the fence as well..
Wow!!!! I believe I have experienced this before. Very cool. Is this where the guy says, "Can you please make up your mind?" :) This was fun to read Sarahlin.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 17, 2013
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